Hugo Nominees 2006
- Learning the World by Ken MacLeod (Orbit; Tor)
After a string of increasingly incomprehensible books that focused too much on politics at the expense of everything else, MacLeod's entry this year is something of a throwback, a first contact story, or as the subtitle says, "a scientific romance". In the future everyone has weird names, from the main human viewpoint character, the young girl Atomic Discourse Gale, to the generation ship she lives in, called "But the Sky, My Lady, the Sky". Atomic maintains a blog where she divulges information to her fellow pilgrims on strange signals coming from the same star system they're heading to colonize. This turns out to be the first encounter with another intelligent species, dubbed the Alien Space Bats, who have their own civilization and are aware that some unusual object is heading their way.
Things take a turn late in the book as the starship pulls up nearby to start their colonization process and the politics ramp up. The space-bat society makes use of a lower caste drone class, which are inadvertently uplifted by scientific nano-tech unknowingly released by the ship. This causes some unrest down on the planet, while back at the ship, Atomic and her pals born on the ship are old enough now to be considered indepedent colonists in their own right, but those who have been there from the beginning have their own ideas about what to do in this situation, and there's a certain amount of double-crossing. MacLeod seems most interested in the inevitable conflict that arises when any two cultures first meet, not even so much between the cultures as within each culture independently. He captures well the arrogant, young-person attitude of Atomic, and the two main space-bat characters, Kwarive and Darwin, are amusingly congenial in translation, presumably they don't sound quite so human in their own language, but MacLeod prefers to give them easily relatable emotions, motivations and interactions, they even think of themselves as human.
If there's anything to gripe about here, it's that in the end it all seems a bit thin, which can be said of other MacLeod books I've read. The story is much easier to follow than usual to be sure, so it makes for an entertaining read, but to some degree that serves to shortchange the amount of space to devote to the political and sociological implications that would seem to be the motivation behind the story. In the last chapter, years later, a sort of begrudging sharing of information has been worked out but the two races basically leave each other alone, which is probably the most likely outcome. It's interesting that subsequent MacLeod books have not gotten nominations, this may be the closest he's come to writing something both accessible and popular. There are always lots of ideas in his books, but they tend to suffer more from what gets left out than what gets put in.
- A Feast for Crows by George R.R. Martin (Voyager; Bantam
- Old Man's War by John Scalzi (Tor)
This is a very strong first novel that so consciously but sincerely channels Heinlein that it would almost pass
as the work of the master himself if it weren't for the lack of socialist politics and sex. Scalzi has hit everything
else exactly right, though. The old man of the title, John Perry, is a recent widower who signs up for the army to give himself
something to do and to take advantage of the promise of being rejuvenated. Earth is in contact with many alien races, but
they all hate each other and the armed forces are constantly looking for recruits to defend many of the Earth colonies
out among planets of other systems. The first few chapters take Perry through boot camp, complete with a crazed drill
sargeant, and through several assignments as he quickly rises up through the ranks, distinguishing himself and nearly getting
himself killed several times over. Along the way he hears about a secret special ops group nicknamed the Ghost Brigade,
and when he finally meets a few of them, one of them is obviously his dead wife, somehow brought back to life and with no
memory of her past life. Scalzi plays around quite a bit with the social mechanics of this future where life is cheap
because there are so many people, and how by this rejuvenation process they can recruit seniors who have vastly more
experience and knowledge than their younger counterparts, a relatively simple but interesting premise. The alien race they have the most trouble with, the Consu,
are equally well thought out and Perry uses some of his background to help look beyond their surface alienness and
understand what they're really about. The assumption in this corps is that you don't live very long, but if you can
last ten years you can retire, and while everyone starts with that goal, very few ever make it. I can't really find much to
complain about this book, the story hangs together very well, it's a bit retro I suppose, but he does a great job of
striking the right balance between hard sf and character-driven plot, so the book never gets that clanky feel. The
characters aren't that distinguishable beyond some of the archetypes like the sargeant, but this comes across as just
more Heinlein pastiche, right down to the wise-cracking, Noel Coward-esque dialogue, so it's not necessarily out of place here.
He takes the best qualities of golden age sf and adds a modern sensibility that makes the book both fresh and nostalgic,
and well worth reading. I'm curious to read the next book to see if he can do it again.
- Accelerando by Charles Stross (Ace; Orbit)
The SF encyclopedia would call this a "fixup", a series of linked stories originally published separately, with
maybe some new material to help patch it all together. The patching is minimal here, this is an assemblage of
the geeked-out new-ideas-in-every-sentence stories with which Stross made a name for himself a scant five years ago.
While his previous novels, actually written later than most of this, are able to take a comparatively leisured pace
and tell a story with a beginning, middle and end, this book has no such pretensions and throws information at the reader
at such a breakneck pace it is frankly offputting after awhile. Somewhere in here is a linear narrative, albeit with
several large jumps forward in time, chronicling the exploits of future techno-nerd Manfred Macx and his descendants,
in their never-ending quest to achieve, conquer and transcend the technological singularity predicted by Vernor Vinge,
what Stross calls "the rapture of the nerds". The book cannot possibly be digested in one reading. Even having read
a few of the installments in their originally published form (three of which were Hugo nominees in other categories),
there's just too many ideas and too much going on to attempt to explain what Stross is on about. Apparently there are
these aliens out there that look like lobsters, although they look like that just to give us something to relate to.
They have something to do with a series of intergalactic "routers", portals in space that can cover vast distances
in a heartbeat. As mankind is overtaken by the collective processing power of its computers, civilization starts to
morph if not break down altogether. The inner planets are being consumed for raw materials, manufacturing so-called
Matroshka systems, basically nested dyson spheres around the sun. There's some sort of pivotal election that will decide
the fate of the human race. You could spend the rest of your life trying to make sense of this book. The basic story
is easy to spot, it's not a difficult read per se, but you know as you're reading it that you're missing a lot, while
at the same time being sort of annoyed that there is so much to take in all at once. Maddening, diffuse, probably
brilliant, Doctorow's cover blurb says it all, "Makes hallucinogens obsolete."
- Spin by Robert Charles Wilson (Tor)
Wilson turns out another winner with this entry, building on the strengths of his previous novels to tell
a story with all the sense of wonder you need, but while the science drives the plot the focus is really on
the characters and their own reactions to the world changing around them. The eponymous Spin is the somewhat
dubious name given to a barrier built around the Earth, pretty much instantaneously, which simultaneously blocks
out the stars, controls an artificial sun and causes the relative time within to move much more slowly than the
universe as a whole.
How does it work? Who cares, Wilson is never too hung up on the mechanics of his science,
taking Clarke's "indistinguishable from magic" dictum to spare us endless boring pages of future physics, which may
upset the clanky hard sf crowd but is probably just as well. Instead the focus is on the viewpoint character Tyler,
who has grown up in the shadow of his best friends' rich family, movers and shakers who not only adapt to profit by
the changed world but seek to understand what it all means. In that respect the characters are bit thick, it would
seem that the prospect that the Spin is some sort of protection from something doesn't really cross anyone's mind,
though it would seem rather obvious. The book covers a number of years through these characters' lives, with more
sense of wonder coming from the occasional probes sent up through the barrier to see what's going on in the rest of
the galaxy as the sun ages and the stars move around. There's also an ongoing unrequited romance between Tyler and
his friend Diane, who goes off to join a cult of sorts to make sense of the new order of things in her own way. When
the true purpose of the Spin is finally revealed, it's a satisfyingly complicated, stapledonian take on Von Neumann
machines and both their origins and destiny.
Intercut with the main story are occsional chapters taking place in the future where Tyler and Diane are on the run from
something and he's going through a kind of metabolic transformation that's both dangerous and debilitating. It seems
unnecessary to do it this way, there's no real reason to have much of these chapters at all other than to pad the book out,
if they were all in their proper sequence at the end it would move the climax of the revelations of the Spin's purpose too
far from the conclusion of the book, and normally with this type of device the main focus should be on the later story, where here
that is not the case. This keeps it from being perfect, but its still a great read anyway and I really like how Wilson keeps
his story grounded in the characters' lives and how they are affected by the dramatic changes in their perception of the universe
and the status quo. As the pace of technological change continues to advance in our own world, we should similarly examine more
how it affects us and our worldview as on the changes themselves.
- Burn by James Patrick Kelly (Tachyon Publications)
Reviewed October 2007:
One of the longer Kelly stories you'll ever read,
this should be a good thing, as the author has plenty
of ideas and seems to need the space to cover them all.
On the surface this is the story of a young man named
Prosper, or "Spur" for short, who lives on a planet co-opted
as a pseudo-utopia, voluntarily cut off from most of the
technology available to those elsewhere, whom they refer
to as upsiders. There's an ongoing conflict with the indigenous
population, known as "pukpuks", who aren't the original
inhabitants of the planet either, they just got there
first and even after it was signed away to this new community
of Walden they chose to stay, to the point that they're
now waging a terrorism campaign of setting fires to the
forests planted by the Waldenites. Spur is pressed into
service fighting the fires, and an injury during one particularly
nasty burn lands him in the hospital, where he accidentally
makes contact with a young upsider known as the High Gregory,
who has some sort of royal lineage. And that's all just
in the first chapter or so, what unfolds from there are
several plots going on at once, where Spur has to reconcile
his previous understanding of the upsiders and their use
of technology with what he sees from the High Gregory,
while at the same time trying to patch things up with
his estranged wife, come to grips with the death of her
brother, his childhood friend, realize that the both of
them were sympathizing with the other side, and make a
choice as to whether to stay with his supposedly simple
life on Walden. With all that in hand, Kelly needs a novella
to cover it all, but it almost doesn't seem like it's
quite enough to do the story justice. Spur's wife Comfort
is offstage for so long that the impact of her traitorous
revelation is substantially lessened, and her brother
is already dead when the story begins. The use of the
High Gregory seems to be more a vehicle to represent the
clash of cultures, but to what end I'm not sure, and his
initial meeting with Spur hinges on coincidence that is
mostly explained away by giving him some sort of superpower
to "make luck". The choice of story title, and the fact
that fires are being fought at all, would appear to be
mostly for imagery, as it seems the plot could have done
just fine without it, or at least with it being de-emphasized
a bit. But I don't want to give the wrong idea, this is
an ambitious story that would fall apart completely in
the hands of a lesser talent, and Kelly's characters,
his selection of quotes from Thoreau, the book's dedicatee,
give plenty of additional levels to the narrative that
make it well worth reading. Usually the purpose of a novella
is to tell a story that would seem to padded if told in
a longer form, but in this case I can't help but think
a longer version might have been more successful.
- "Magic for Beginners" by Kelly Link (Magic for Beginners,
Small Beer Press; Fantasy & Science Fiction September 2005)
There is no magic in this story, or if there is, it's more of the Clarkeian variety that is indistinguishable from technology. And who are the beginners in question? Link doesn't answer that either, so while the title may set up a standard fantasy milieu, what she delivers is anything but, rather a hodgepodge of disparate ideas thrown together to keep the reader guessing from beginning to end. The story mostly follows a group of five teenagers (told from the perspective of someone who knows them but who never interacts with anyone in the story). One of them, Jeremy, is taking a trip to Las Vegas with his mother, who just inherited a phone booth and a drive-up wedding chapel from an aunt. His father is a writer and a kleptomaniac, who feels guilty after writing a fictional story featuring his son that ends up killing him off. Jeremy and his friends are all obsessed with a tv show called "The Library", which features an ongoing set of characters like a soap opera, but you never know when it's going to be on, or who any of the actors are playing any of the parts. They are starting to wonder if maybe the show is really happening. The story seems to set up the idea of an infinite regression, hinting that the teenagers may either be fictional themselves, or else playing out their own tv show without realizing it. Jeremy can even talk to the Library's recently deceased hero, Fox, or someone who purports to be him, by calling that phone booth in Vegas that now belongs to them. There's a lot going on in here, Link expertly weaves a spell through all the various events and characters that has you totally off kilter without being willfully obtuse, as though there really is a perfectly reasonable explanation for all this, but she's not telling. The story doesn't provide enough clues to draw obvious conclusions, but leaves you feeling intrigued rather than annoyed, or else with your head spinning too much to notice.
- "The Little Goddess" by Ian McDonald (Asimov's June 2005)
Once again McDonald plunges the reader into a seemingly alien setting that this time turns out to be near-future Nepal, where the title character tells her own story of how she was selected as a young girl to be a goddess based on her ability to witness disturbing or violent acts without reacting negatively. Mixed into this traditional practice (which is still observed in real-life Nepal) are some genetically and technologically modified ruling class including a young prince whom she is eventually arranged to marry after the goddess thing doesn't work out as well as people had hoped. McDonald hits the right tone in telling this story from the girl's perspective, where she can describe what people are saying but can't necessarily comment on it because she is too young to understand, leaving the reader to fill in the gaps in her knowledge. The story jumps ahead a few years at a time, but still ends with the girl (who I don't think is ever given a name) at a relatively young age, trying to get back to Nepal and using her newfound upgrades to give medical advice and help fix a truck. With each advance in the story, the girl's maturity grows, and her ability to relate what is happening around her grows with it. This is not my favorite type of story, but McDonald creates a vivid and certainly unusual backdrop for the action. It's not hard to follow, he gives you no clue as to where the story is going, I suppose at the end its been about a journey of discovery, a sheltered young girl forced to adapt to the outside world, but while she may have learned from the experience, the reader may not feel the same. This is typical of McDonald's work, pretty to listen to, some arresting imagery, but in the end all you have are impressions, and they tend to fade sooner or later.
- "Identify Theft" by Robert J. Sawyer (Down These Dark
Reviewed November 2007: Sawyer tries his hand at the hard-boiled detective story, putting him on Mars and telling an engaging yet curiously superficial tale
revolving around the ability to transfer your consciousness into an artificial body. The details of how this actually works are left as
an exercise for the reader, what Sawyer is interested in is the mystery. The president of the company who performs this process for people has
gone missing, and his wife Cassandra turns up at the office of Lomax, the narrator, asking him to find her husband, Joshua. Since everyone agrees
that going missing in an enclosed Mars colony is extremely difficult to do, Sawyer unfortunately drops a couple of clues right up front that
make it blindingly obvious that Joshua has in fact transferred his own consciousness into an artificial copy of his wife, and wants Lomax to find
his original body to cover up the crime, which he proceeds to do. In spite of everything you see on the news, it never occurs to Lomax that
the spouse should be a suspect, but even so there's a further plot to unravel as to the motive behind the murder, made more difficult by
the fact that he doesn't know it's a murder yet. Sawyer throws in enough references to Martian gravity or what-not to remind you we're not
on earth, but the specifics of the setting aren't allowed to get in the way of the story, unless it's for atmosphere, such as the
final confrontation in a water-logged, rat-infested warehouse (still on Mars, mind you). I'm sure the final resolution of who did what
to whom and why follows some internal logic, but it doesn't really matter, the good guys win and the bad guys get what's coming to them.
As has been the case with much of Sawyer's recent work that I've read, I get the feeling he's not trying very hard, and what comes out is
perfectly servicable and mildly entertaining and even memorable, but well short of what I would expect from him.
- "Inside Job" by Connie Willis (Asimov's January 2005)
Haven't read a Willis story in a while, this one doesn't disappoint, although she doesn't exactly break any new narrative ground either. Two people, Rob and Kildy, work together to debunk various types of paranormal phenomena, but run into trouble in trying to figure out the angle behind a channeler named Ariaura, who is supposed to be channelling some ancient diety named Isus, but whose expensive seminars are gradually being interrupted by the ghost of H.L. Mencken, who doesn't believe any of it. Willis has internalized every scrap of information about Mencken ever conceived, as is her usual m.o., although she tends to embue Rob with more foreknowledge of Mencken's life than anyone could possibly have. The story takes a more leisurely pace than Willis's usual style, there is only one plot going on, so the characters have time to do other things and no lives are in danger. What's interesting about this setup though is how it calls into question the nature of belief. Rob and Kildy know they're dealing with a charlatan, but they can't prove it unless they can catch her displaying a gap in her knowledge of Mencken. But they have trouble doing it, and come to realize that even if they do, that still doesn't constitute proof, because there could be legitimate reasons that Mencken wouldn't be able to answer one question or another. Rob even suspects for a time that Kildy is in cahoots with Ariaura and has set up the whole thing. Fortunately the paranoia angle proves short-lived, and in the end nobody is sure what really happened, was Mencken for real or not? Willis doesn't preach, but the idea of "extraordinary evidence" as a means of convincing someone to change their mind on something is convincingly challenged.
- "The Calorie Man" by Paolo Bacigalupi (Fantasy & Science
Fiction October/November 2005)
This long novelette is bursting with ideas
that can barely all fit into the required space, with
a little more filling out this could be novel easily.
The calorie man of the title is Lalji, something of a
mercenary in a future where all the standard crops have
been destroyed by various plagues and pestilence, and
all that's left is some form of engineered grain that
is simply referred to as "calories" and is proprietary
to a few huge agriculture companies. The worlds supplies
of energy would also seem to have been depleted, so that
feeding these calories to draft animals or using technologically
advanced versions of primitive mechanisms like wind-up
springs are the primary ways that people get around and
get things done. Within this backdrop, Lalji decides to
navigate a barge full of "unlicensed" calories down the
Mississippi River, meeting up with a supplier named Bowman,
who it turns out has a side-business of his own that he
hopes will break the monopoly of the big conglomerates.
The backdrop of this story presents a completely plausible
yet frighteningly different future where suburbs have
emptied out because there's not enough energy to transport
people around, people sell energy at exorbitant prices
to feed their families, and yet there's nothing to eat
except the bland tasteless calories. This story jumps
around a lot, the characters are a bit difficult to get
a handle on, the alien nature of the future makes it more
challenging to understand while trying to follow the plot
at the same time, but it's a very original take on a very
possible future, and given the amount of thought that's
gone into it, it would be a shame if the author didn't
use a few more stories to explore it a little more.
- "Two Hearts" by Peter S. Beagle (Fantasy & Science Fiction
I haven't read "The Last Unicorn", my impression is that if you have, this story will mean something more to you, as it seems to pick up on certain characters in their dotage to see what happens to them, more as an epilogue to a longer narrative. But taken on its own merits, this is still an effective, well-told and clearly described story, given from the viewpoint of a young girl whose town has been terrorized by a griffin. After numerous knights have been sent by the king to deal with the problem and each has met his demise one by one, she takes it upon herself to go find the king and ask him to do something about it. Along the way she meets an old wizard and his female companion, who are also going to see the king, and they join forces. Now this doesn't sound terribly original even to the limited amount of fantasy I've read, but there's such affection for the chracters that you don't care, and Beagle doesn't get distracted with over-describing everything and sticks to the plot. They meet the king, who is a doddering old man at this point, but he agrees that something should be done and takes it upon himself to do it. The second half of story builds on the underlying unspoken tension that the king has no business taking on this challenge and that it will all end badly. The ending is somewhat expected but movingly told (GVG says it brought him to tears when he first read it), the pacing and structure are exemplary and the story does stay with you. Having said that, it's not the sort of thing I enjoy reading that much, but that's certainly not Beagle's fault, if this is your cup of tea, you'll probably love it.
- "TelePresence" by Michael A. Burstein (Analog July/August
Ten years ago Burstein's first published story,
TeleAbsence, was inexplicably nominated for a Hugo. It
told the story of a school age boy, Tony, who was able
to hack into the virtual reality private school that he
otherwise couldn't afford because of his desire for learning.
A decade later, it's time for a sequel, a longer story
where Tony is all grown up and is now the main proponent
of the technology of "TelePresence", the shared virtual
reality that is being marketed now to the public school
system of California, in order to make the advantages
of the experience available to everyone. The new story
follows the standard Analog formula, setting up a mystery
where the system suddenly goes bad and kills a couple
of students, and Tony takes up the hunt to find the source
of the problem before he loses the big sale to the most
populous and influential school system in the country.
The resolution at least avoids the computer virus angle,
but doesn't really come up with something that much more
interesting, but in the end who or what was behind these
deaths is a bit lame and seems not to really be the point.
Instead you have a long diatribe about the shortcomings
of the standard educational system and how TelePresence
is far superior, complete with testamonials from former
students, including one of Tony's old classmates. There's
also an extended epilogue where Tony goes to the cemetary
to visit the grave of the teacher who had such an influence
on him. Burstein has cornered the market on "education
sf", as opposed to educational sf, and really rhapsodizes
over both the dichotomy between a teacher's calling and
their lot in life. While it's certainly sincere and pushes
all the right buttons in the right order, and is certainly
short on the typical Analog clankiness, the story doesn't
really rise above your average, didactic Analog story.
- "I, Robot" by Cory Doctorow (The Infinite Matrix February
This story is part homage to, part refutation of its namesake (the Asimov collection, not the original Eando Binder story, or the Will Smith movie). Doctorow perfectly captures the tone of an old-fashioned sf story, replete with the stilted dialog and noirish rapid-fire crime-fighting prose, but the similarities end there. The author says he wrote this in response to Ray Bradbury's whining over Michael Moore's coopting of the title "Fahrenheit 451" for his movie "Fahrenheit 9/11". The idea is that many of the classic sf stories promote their premise against a backdrop of a well-meaning but totalitarian state, and Doctorow's intent is to try to depict what that would really be like, what kind of a society would there need to be for all the robots in the country to be made by one company. There's a healthy dose of current events to extrapolate from, where the US is the benevolent dictatorship, and the protagonist, Arturo, is a cop who has at his disposal any number of bugging, surveillance and tracking devices, including robot cops, to help him fight crime. When his daughter goes missing after skipping school, he puts the usual methods into play, but hits a snag when the robots he's dispatched stop responding. What he ends up falling into is an elaborate plot spearheaded by his ex-wife, who represents the country that has been at war with them for years, using their own brand of robot that doesn't subscribe to Asimov's three laws. Arturo is too entrenched in the system to bring himself to change sides easily, but by the end of story he's not too sure where his loyalties lie. Doctorow doesn't dwell on either the politics or the technology as much as you might think, you can take this story at face value and still be justifiably entertained. The robots are present throughout the story but are really just part of the fabric of the world that he's proposing, merely another tool in the government's basket of things utilized to keep us all safe from one another.
- "The King of Where-I-Go" by Howard Waldrop (SCI FICTION
December 7, 2005)
Waldrop tells a semi-autobiographical tale in the first person of a boy and his sister growing up in the south in the '50's, and how their relationship changes when his sister contracts polio. Her case is not severe, so she is eventually able to walk again, and for maybe 80% of the story there is no sfnal element whatsoever. Years later as adults, she goes off to some shadowy clinic and communicates infrequently with her brother, who starts noticing odd things happening. There's a strong nostalgia element to this story, sort of a "Jeffty is Five" for the millennium, harkening back to one's boyhood and the things you remember happening and wish you either could've appreciated more or could've changed somehow. The ending is pure Twilight Zone, the past and future come together, and while it's not the most original effect it seems to work in this context, in the sense that the narrator gets what he wants, even though it causes everything to be different. I haven't read much Waldrop, I always got the impression he was a little more off the wall than this, but this story is very straight up and evocative, wistful in fact, presumably because this is a subject close to his heart and maybe a bit of wish fulfillment. Or maybe he's just a really good writer and this has nothing to do with anything in his own life. Either way, the story holds up on its own merits, but it's a bit of a throwback, there's nothing here to indicate it wasn't written 30 years ago. Something of a pattern with the Resnick short story nominee: straightforward tale of two people dealing with one's serious illness, which veers off into sf only towards the end.
- SHORT STORY
- "Seventy-Five Years" by Michael A. Burstein (Analog January/February 2005)
Burstein gets two nominations this year, including this lightweight entry that I think must be tangentially related to Analog's anniversary, since it appears in the 75th anniversary issue and has the word "seventy-five" in the title. Schmidt's editorial in the same issue refers briefly to the span of time and how he just made it into the editor's office before the 50th anniversary back in 1980. The story also uses as its premise the passage of time, in the sense of how it's not what it used to be. I assume this is a real law Burstein references that allows census records of specific individuals to be made public after 72 years, the law being so old that the assumption was the person would almost assuredly be dead by then. The story details a conversation between a Massachusetts senator 100 years in the future and his ex-wife. The senator wants to extend this time limit to 75 years, and his ex has figured out why. If you're thinking that doesn't sound very exciting, well it's not, but the point being made has more to do with the mutability of ethics laws and how they can have far-reaching consequences beyond the initial controversy that may surround them (for one, the Massachusetts angle is played upon for the gay marriage thing in the story). The prose is a bit clunky, heavily reliant on dialog that sounds a bit forced at times, not on the Locus list, not an award-winner, but a decent idea imaginatively executed.
- "The Clockwork Atom Bomb" by Dominic Green (Interzone May/June 2005)
The lone UK entry in this category is a curious choice, although certainly a decent enough story. Green drops us into a complicated scenario in central Africa where the main character Mativi is the future equivalent of a UN weapons inspector, come to investigate some unexploded ordinance that turns out to be much more dangerous than anyone thought. The machine has been co-opted by the local government as a source of both energy and waste disposal, when in fact it is a miniature black hole that is on the verge of losing containment and sinking into the center of the earth, which would be a bad thing for everyone concerned. The author's ability to explain the physics without getting talky, while at the same time setting up dramatic tension and filling in the political details surrounding it, is very impressive, although an extra reading doesn't hurt to make sure you've got a handle on everything. Tucked away in Interzone where 99% of American fans would never see it, this story benefits from the preponderance of UK denizens from last year's Worldcon doing the nominating this year. While a long shot for a win, it's a story worthy of the extra attention the nomination can bring.
- "Singing My Sister Down" by Margo Lanagan (Black Juice, Allen & Unwin; Eos)
Lanagan came out of left field (or more precisely, Australia) two years ago and created a huge buzz with a book of short stories that I don't think had been published previously. As I understand it, they mostly deal with aboriginal or African settings (I would've thought she was black herself, but she isn't), and this story, the first in the book, was thought by many to be the best. Spectacularly well-told, the story details the emotions of a family whose grown daughter is being put to death by standing in a tar pit until it swallows her up. The other members of her family are required to sit around her on mats and talk to her as she slowly sinks into the tar. Her crime, killing her new husband with an axe, is only mentioned obliquely, his family is there too, watching with many others from outside of the pit. Told from the perspective of the younger brother, Lanagan strikes an authentic note with the dialog and general patois and rhythm of the prose that makes it so convincingly "aboriginal". Technically this isn't really sf, while there's no direct reference to an established culture that practices this method of justice, it could really happen, I would think, it's a more plausible society than Jackson's "The Lottery", which could be considered a direct antecedent. This story puts forth a unique idea in a unique way and stays with you, all the hallmarks of a story worthy of an award, I think it's the one to beat.
- "Tk'tk'tk" by David D. Levine (Asimov's March 2005)
Levine turns up in Asimovs for the first time after turning in solid stories and a couple of previous nominees from the more fantasy-oriented publications. This entry takes an odd premise, or at least one you wouldn't see outside of the 1950's, where Walker, an Earth salesman of inventory control software of all things, goes to an alien planet to sell his wares and has an awful lot of trouble adapting to the natives culture and their way of doing business. In truth the aliens wacky protocols and sudden business holidays doesn't stray much from any third world country here, and meanwhile everyone is trying to take advantage of Walker and rob him of his material posessions, either through trickery or just plain thievery. Although he ultimately meets with some success, the difficulties he encounters causes him to question the purpose of why he was doing it at all, such that he ends up "going native", which is not what would've happened in the '50's, I wouldn't think. This twist is a surprise, not least because it happens rather abruptly, but ultimately you can sympathize with Walker and how as a lone representative of Earth, he is much more likely to be affected by the aliens than the other way around. There's a strong element of gentle humor in this story, too, particularly in the epilog. Maybe not the best story of the year, but worth reading.
- "Down Memory Lane" by Mike Resnick (Asimov's April/May 2005)
Also not a Locus nominee, this story spends most of its
8 pages as a conventional tale of an elderly couple coming
to grips with the wife's onset of Alzheimers, the meetings
with doctors, the gradual deterioration of her memory.
Told from the point of view of the husband, it does a
credible job of conveying the bond between the couple
even as her illness takes hold, and how despondent he
is over his inability to do anything about it. The challenge
comes in the last quarter of the story, when he takes
matters into his own hands by seeking out a clinic in
Central America that is apparently soliciting subjects
to test a potential cure for dementia by first giving
them something that causes the same effects as the real
thing. Why exactly they do it this way instead of using
real sufferers of the disease is not explained, and because
the story is told in first person, it necessarily veers
into "Flowers for Algernon" territory as the narrator
gradually loses his cognitive ability. You could say it
has a happy ending, but since it's not the copout of a
miraculous cure, it can only be the opposite. This was
a decent story from the perennial nominee, I'm not sure
if the choice of first person ultimately works, maybe
the doctor's POV would've made more sense, but I'm sure
Resnick tells it this way for a reason, in a way putting
you into the head of someone who has made the choice to
temporarily lose his memory, and by the end is blissfully
unaware of that choice or that his memory isn't coming
- DRAMATIC PRESENTATION
- Batman Begins Story, David S. Goyer. Screenplay, Christopher
Nolan and David S. Goyer. Based on the character created, Bob Kane.
Directed, Christopher Nolan. (Warner Bros.)
- The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe
Screenplay, Ann Peacock and Andrew Adamson and Christopher Markus
& Stephen McFeely. Based on the novel, C.S. Lewis. Directed, Andrew
Adamson. (Walt Disney Pictures/Walden Media)
- Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire Screenplay, Steven
Kloves. Based on the novel, J.K. Rowling. Directed, Mike Newell.
- Serenity Written & Directed, Joss Whedon. (Universal Pictures/Mutant
- Wallace & Gromit in the Curse of the Were-Rabbit Screenplay,
Steve Box & Nick Park and Bob Baker and Mark Burton. Directed, Nick
Park & Steve Box. (Dreamworks Animation/Aardman Animation)